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1. Yal
   

   21 February 2010 at 18:06 | Permalink | Reply

   I confess the first two panels are kind of confusing me. Is that the same juggler? How much time has passed?

   • Michi
     

     21 February 2010 at 18:28 | Permalink | Reply

     Haha, not my best comic! :D Supposed to be the same juggler. Like, he seems like a loser because he does stuff alone all the time, but all that work makes him pretty awesome in the end.

     Thanks for the feedback <3

     • Yal
       

       21 February 2010 at 21:48 | Permalink | Reply

       All it’s missing some narration boxes or interstitial panels to indicate the passage of time (if you want to get fancy, make him age). I was able to figure out what you meant, but right now it looks like he went from dropping balls to avatar of Shiva without changing his shirt!

       • Michi
         

         22 February 2010 at 11:20 | Permalink | Reply

         Cool, I made a quick change, and will keep this in mind in the future! :D

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